Jamieneo66's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A true AVGN fan]

Real Review :D

Take this from me :x
and this is Seranatis, one of ye watchers
I'm not sure whether this was just a quick little something or you spent awhile on it, the idea itself is sound however. But the couple things i'll suggest is, always have a preloader, theres the DA ones for deviantart, and theres a NG one, its just for some people, who are doing multiple things or listening to music at the time, the flash would start up straight away and then interfere with the music or whatever their currently doing
You can always design your own button and loader of course, theres actionscript on the internet and video's that'll help thoguh it does depend on your version of flash as well, personally myself i use Flash 8
The other part, i see you've done a mixture of motion tweening and FbF(Frame by Frame) the best tip for that is to use onion skinning, so you can redraw and make the slight changes for the smooth transition of movement. However asides from that it came out well, i'm sure your next flash will come out alot better :D

[The Beast Snacks 1]

No problem

Well for me, it is a tired storyline, but whats wrong with that? Nearly everything fantasy orientated consists of heroes, villans, save the world plot
Anyone who thinks diffrent is a moron, thats always the basic plotline, just they always change the odd few things so even though its the same, its still diffrent.
However, several things, as i assume this is anime based with the facial shapes and all that jazz, in terms of speaking, well as you know, its only really the mouths with the eyes that move, slightly maybe shimmering or widening upwards in shock and so forth to represent the expressions. The animation was smooth, but a little messy, so you may need to work on that. The sound, well....the music could be a little louder, and the voicework could be done a little better, say, if someones going to be doing a screaming and shouting, it would be better if they kept distance from the mic as when that minotaur like creature attacked, he'd shout out and there'd be alot of interference in the mic of the reverb and stuff so like, ouch kinda
If ye need help with voicework feel free to ask and i'll be glad to offer my lovely english voice 8D
But eitherway, episode two will be better then thsi i suspect, you just need to take care a little bit with details, work on the body proportions as it may just of been me but, the people seemed overly thin XD in terms of their bone structure.
So as it is, it'll look good if you just work hard and i look forward to the second episode.

[Freerun]

I tip my hat good sir!

Just to be clear
Mirrors edge was shit!
and it was a good piece of animation, smooth and clean and generally enjoyable, stick animation or not!

[Itachi, Itachi, Itachi..]

Kinda had...something...

Eee.....
my only problem is well, the voice was to slow, in comparison to FG its abit faster ain't it.
And the brother attitude was right but it varies, its generally Nii-san from brother to brother, Nii-chan from sister to brother, and well for a old brother its Nii-san or Onii-san
and for a sister its Nee-chan or Onee-chan, spoken the same, spelt diffrent :D

[The Sketch Collab 2010]

*applauds*

Overall, i enjoyed it. I never heard the original music choice so i couldn't give a vote in, yet i think it was the right choice as it sounded good and fitted well with the feel of the animation :D
Also everybody did great, and now thats two i've been in >.> i've gotta make sure i'm in 2011 and i step up my game!
Great work guys :D love it all :p

[left 4 x'mas]

No worries

Don't worry so much, the animation is fine itself, you just need to work more on the art drawings itself like shading and more colouring and stuff, the only problem is stuff like that usually makes the animation take longer as you know XD
And abit more length and there you go, as i say your fine with animation though, just those two points you need to work on i spect and these'll be great some animations you churn out the old mind-grinder :D

cAtyviri responds:

thank you so much :3!!
i know i still have a long way to go, but i'll keep trying to get better ^^

[ILoveEgg Special-EggSong]

Awesome

I will forever love this song since i saw it years ago in ugo flash player site thing o.o
and thus its faved and again i will forever love it because the voice is addictive and cute, the animation is cute, and its just kickass and awesome!
so yeah :D

[Bleach: alones sing along]

Keep it up

Well the lip syncing was good, and i know how it is to be new to flash so well done, i doubt this'll get blammed because despite being a test of sorted its still a flash and not half bad :\ so yeah, keep it up

sasuke29 responds:

thanks so much for your support. any tips or help with flash is appreciated. ^_^

[LARRY episode 1]

Should of gave him a lil blonde devil beard

Good animation, good use of sound effects and a good story, i don't really see much where you need to improve so yeah, awesome love it and i look forward to the rest :)

[The Real Legend]

Old but still....

Ok so.....this flash is a little old now, by six years...
But still, the animation was very smooth, the music well used. The comedy itself was good and it does fall under a good spoof. Not one of these that mock one or two flaws in a game, but more takes another twist from the original story and instead of being a serious look is instead comedic and humurous. So i say kudos, keep up the good work, and i look forward to part four when you release that, i just hope it doesn't take as long eh? *wink*